It´s almost time so Charly goes out on the dime,
not much money but no problem honey,
rich kids wondering around old school talking about that and the other clown.
Getting prepared since I´m not scared
getting prepaid since they can end in a maze of hay.
Go on and about shouting that´s a trout!
Everything is cool with the groove just feeling smooth,
I watch I´m keyed up I´m in the zone the snooze with some booze.
Beer here,beer there, whiskey now, margarita later
o yeah, pocket your money later
and then see ya alligator!
Friday night hustling
while is bustling
Charly goes whistling
girls goes, o, darling!
smiling and being kin of the king
Friday Night Hustling!
Stay Frosty gents and gentesses.
This was a great poem. I liked the pace in the poem – it was like a drumbeat taking the poem one step higher during the paragraphs, like a song and it really worked with putting Charly in the third person. Loved it
See I told you! you said like a drumbeat, like a song, now you really really have to replace the photo Mr.Springsteen with mine
🙂 I think I do
Mind yourself, Charly 🙂
Love your poem, it cheers me up, thank you!
Good, cheer up! 🙂
Great piece of slam, man!
Its like something off 22 jump street dude!
Or is it 21?
Huh, thoughts gone, but I dont care.
Not wearing any underwear.
I.like cher, but not sherbet…
Sour grapes and vinegar face
Makes the place sticky,
Like the crew aboard a vessel.
Sea-men. Amen, god send.
Man,Henry, are you the one high as a kite or is it only me………
Kite in the light
21 or 22 jump in straight
grapes, vines, vineyards,
worlocks, go unlock
Na, I think is you that´s high, hold on….puff, puff, now inhale…..damn this one was good!
Fun piece & it made me smile!
Thank´s Caroline, I had fun writing it too, worst of all…. I´m home reading and writing! so no hustle for my muscle.
Hmmm there’s always tomorrow!
Sounds like you are going to have a great Friday, hopefully you will remember it tomorrow…enjoy my friend. 🙂
The sad part is that right now is 9:20 a.m and I have been awake from 7 a.m in the morning. No party yesterday……bummer, just felt like it but by cooler part of the head prevailed so instead of doing it I did my party in writing.
Damn – your home – well make yourself a good strong margarita . . . I’ve had a few tonight . . . girlfriends took me out for a few, & some Mexican food, of course 😉
And forgot – like the poem – nice rhythm – flows well 🙂
Thank you 🙂
Ay ay ayyyyyyy! (that´s mexican scream by the way) party animal you are. We should get together, you buy I drink.
What do they say about mixing alcohol? Have a great night…
Don´t forget, they said something too about mixing alcohol and weed, hence happens what it happens……. a cool hustle poem. 😉
wait did u say this was a poem?? -_-
feeling the “grove” right?
lol…more like sleep 🙂
right on; nice poem as usual. great flow and comedy as well.
You know I go with the flow! Thank you sir, appreciate it, don´t know if it´s poetry or not but it´s fun to just write.