Walking up the steps
i hear the depths
of someone….something
i´m freaking
i hear the noise
no voice
i don´t rejoice
what can it be?
i ask me
up the steps
a lot of depths
nooooooo!
monster
dongster
no master
dangermaster
it´s him
the slim
sleepy hollow of sin
Stay Frosty gents and gentesses.
This is a lovely poem! Beautiful flow and imagery. I’m new to your work, but I like the rhythm and ambiguity of this story. Best wishes! 🙂
Thank you Padaek, I´ve been reading quite some of your poems, great poet you are, so coming from you I appreciate it.
Lol – please, you’re too kind. I’m very new to poetry. But, thank you a lot. I really appreciate it and it’s very encouraging. Looking forward to following you and reading more of your blog/excellent poems. Best wishes brother! 🙂
Best wishes to you too, keep on with the poetry at least for the sake of the readers…..or just me 🙂
Have a great day!
Sleepy hollow of sin…very curious. Great piece.
I´m a curious guy, some might say even strange! I say they rest of humanity are the ones who are strange but who knows……..
Thank´s for the compliment caroline
I love ❤ your dogs Charly! I don't buy it that he's (or is this the she?) a monster. Looks more like a big cuddle bug to me! 😀
It´s a HE but more like a she-he, he´s kind of gay. Not kidding, we reached that conclusion as a group in the family he does have some mannerisms that are just not for a normal male, plus he suffers from arrested development no kidding about that one either, he´s a big puppy and acts like one. And yes he does cuddle, the problem is that he doesn´t realise that he´s a grown dog and not a puppy so if most of the time if your around here you can expect to be sitting down on the sofa and being smashed by a 90 pound dog.
It´s by far the strangest dog you can ever encounter, I can guarantee that. I could write a novel out of the things this beast does. But he´s part of the family so what are you going to do.
Love him! 😀 And write that novel! People love books about dogs! lol!
Awwwww he is just gorgeous!!
a gorgeous weirdo 😉 Like the owner basically
Great poem Charly and your friend looks really comfortable. 🙂
He´s too comfortable, I just did this so PETA didn´t say anything to me after I write some nasty post about the good of killing whales……
Lol, sleepy hollow of sin! 🙂
I love this one!!!
Me too…. 😉 Just kidding. Thank you Sadie.
Wow…You are such a beautiful poet…i hope i become one like you…:-)
That´s impossible, I´m the new Shakespeare in town…….can´t take away that title from me
Yes yes completly u r the only one…don’t wory no1 wil take away that title frm u…i luv ur poems…u r one of my inspiration..i just said that hope i become one like u…:-)
Too many compliments but thanks, I´m saying thank´s for the writers here in wordpress( that includes you) which is my way of learning. I call this wordpress thing my free online university. Free if you take away the part where at the end of the month the internet bill comes in the mailbox.
Thank you so much…yes you are totally right…:-)