Young men full of pride, cockiness is one word they can not hide.
They train incisively for battle, wanting blood inside that cage they will rattle.
Then, reality hits them when they get to experience the real mortality, but for most
the training is so ingrained in them they take that mortality and find a place in their
minds to set it in neutrality. Scary? For most is a no worry, they´re too occupied to
think of that worry, when training kicks in, is second nature within for them to begin
to do their jobs, that blood they wanted is there to be seek´d and haunted.
People from all walks of life, really putting their life´s in each others knifes,
not to be cool or pride or for glory, it´s just that their individual jobs within
the group requires them to have that little scoop. All of which leads to dark jokes,
finding corpses left behind not much to think of it as a grind, joking about the situation
and slapping each others back in their own retaliation, laughing at each other takes out the
bother, their way to stay sane where it´s a day to day reality of the insane.
Stay Frosty gents and gentesses.
You take me back to the first gulf with this piece Charles. Nostalgia oozes from this piece. I can tell you have seen some things. Respect to you for finding a way to channel it into something creative and brilliant at the same time.
Thank´s H the game. Don´t know why it sort of came out of the blue this morning. Writing certainly is an outlet for this thing and others too I have to say.
Hold on I´m a bit slow, you said first gulf? Henry, you really are an old Game.
Age is but a number. You are as old as you feel, and I feel like a 16yr old
You did kill a pope though centuries ago….you´re really timeless actually. But you do write better than a 16 year old Mr. Game.
That, Mr Priest, I am taking as a compliment, intended or no, I will take them where ever, when ever, they may peek their beautiful little heads up. So thanks Chuck!
This is a wonderful piece. Truthful and sad.
Thank you Anna
Hello Sir Spaniard
I am not sure if it because I have been jamming to those different songs, but this post felt like it could have been a cool rap song….
also, just FYI – I replied to your comment about Fox news (ver on my blog) because I decided to give it a try and I set the DVR – and well, I made a little image to show ya over there.
signed, Mister Prior
PS Boa noite amigo
I think you´ve been jamming too much to those songs. Wouldn´t call it cool, reality as much as you can capture it in a semi small poem.
no comprende
❤
have a nice rat of your night CP4 –
A nice rat? I hate rats, they scare me.
You woke up with the wrong foot today?…. 😉 love you
oh I did not mean “rat” spaniard = that was one of those autocorrect typos = also, I have been up for a while (got up wee early today) – anyhow,
have a nice r e s t of your night- and be good
It´s 12 p.m here !! aaaaaaa ! I´ll be good….no promises though but I´ll try
oh I meant afternoon – you see rat – was supposed to be rest and then night was supposed to be afternoon (just kidding on that one – but not on the rat/rest)
hope your leg is healing up well
Very thought provoking and insightful. Beautiful writing Charly.
Thank you
You are welcome. 💋
I welcome your welcome 😉
Intriguing, sad, well written, C-boy.
Thank you C-girl…C-woman much better.
Okay, C-woman I am. You are C-man. How about that ?
I like C-boy, it even has a cool gangsta rap name ring to it.
“Hey C-boy what you up to?”
Me- “Jus chilling”
See? I´m gangsta
Oh okay 😀 I hereby name you C-boy, you cool guy you! I am C-woman because… that’s what I am >> see, woman?!! 🙂
You´re damn right, a woman you are in capital letters. You´re smart, you´re a professional, you have your head well placed, and it´s you the one in the little box that appears in my comment section then you´re also beautiful.
So, when do we get married?…… Marring the opposite of you
I really liked this one . . .
I really like you…..
Yeah, pretty fond of you, too 🙂
I too know how to make cool little faces and figures, look!!…………… ❤