Lost in a flood of Bourbon he sinks, he drinks but it seems the flood water levels never go down.
Quite the contrary, he´s now sinking more in them, they pull him down
and he can feel he´s chocking, no air, just despair.
Suddenly a revelations….. swim or die !
Stay Frosty gents and gentesses.
P.S. I did steal this idea from this man Richard Ankers | The Writings, but compared to his
writings it seems I have a looong and looong way to go. But was fun.
And it really has 50 words!!
Shhh!!! I stole it from Nina Karedic. And you did good.
Thank´s. So you too are a thief of ideas, good to know I´m not the only one braking Literature laws.
We both said thanks, so I think the literature gods will forgive us.
Whoa, Carlos!!! you did damn good!! it is even poetic in your prose!! Bravo, mon ami.
Well thank you very much, I tried.
Very deep. Throwing a lifebelt. G:)
Thank´s, the belt will not be made of iron right? not very trustworthy a moose that´s on the loose…..
Mage of rubber; filled with Helium – lots of possibilities G:)
Bravo! I love it
Thank you, I tried. Was fun to do.
…actually…. that is GREAT! A gem.
I guess thank´s..I have no idea what you´re talking about the gem thing, but I take everything as compliments so thank´s
It is a compliment. ‘A gem’ is valuable – beautiful – has many angles to reveal it s beauty and its flaws make it ever more beautiful – especially when the light shines on or through it to be seen as the magnificent treasure it is. ❤ Bit like you dear. (and the piece of writing)
That is a really well written story Charly, Great job! 🙂
Thank you little devil princess
Great job Charly, it’s funny I was thinking of writing one of these today before I read yours and now I think I will, you’ve inspired me. 🙂
Thank´s a lot Dom
I really loved this Charly, well done!! 😊😊
Fun idea (the writing idea). Swim or die, that is life!
It sure is
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wow! really nice story.. I loved it 🙂
Thank you very much