A great prompt by FFfAW – Week of 09-15-2015 – 3 | Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers
“What?!!” The cowboy yelled to five unruly horses that didn´t seem to want to eat.
Three of them stared down, but then there where the rebels, named Adam and John.
Adam, stared right back at him without blinking and said, ” we´re tired of this bullshit.”
A roar of laughter came from the cowboy to which Adam replied, ” what´s so funny old
timer?”
“You just said Bull-shit and you´re a horse.”
John chipped in, “and you´re an abusive idiot.”
“For what John? Why is that?”
John gave a sight, “you make us run around cattle for weeks and weeks on end and we never
get a vacation.”
“You´re a horse for crying out loud.”
“I have feeling too you know, not that I can´t do the job but it would be much appreciated if my boss
would at least give me some dignity.” Said Adam.
“Hell yeah! We´re on strike now.” John followed.
That day the cattle stayed where they where. One more day of life thank´s to the two horses.
The challenge was suppose to be of 175 words, I went up to 190. Just 15 over. I´m just a little rebel
like those two horses.
Stay Frosty gents and gentesses.
I can never stay under 175 words either for this challenge! Funny story…
Had a hard time to make it a bit cohesive under 175. Glad you enjoyed it and taking the time to reading it.
LOL Charly! It takes a rebel to write about rebels. Hahaha! Enjoyed it. Great story!
Thank´s Joy, power to the rebels!
LOL!
Haha, great now horses are talking, Guess someone is high…. 😀
You never heard a horse talk? Then you´re not cool
Then again I’ve never been high either….
That´s even less cool, you´re completely uncoolness
Are you really calling me uncool Charly? Me?! 😥
Yeah babe
Nice bit of writing Charly, I liked it very much.
Thank´s Dom