Another great prompt by https://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2015/09/23/25-september-2015/

“Get out of the car!” The police man yelled.

Richard stood still with both hands on the stirring wheel, at least a dozen guns where pointed
at him. He lit up his cigarette and inhaled deeply.

He looked at his passenger and calmly said, “time to go”.

“No,no , please don´t” The passenger screamed in despair, but  it was a futile plead.
A loud bang ruptured the windows and the passenger was instantly dead.

Justice had been done, the man who had kidnapped and raped his son was now dead.
A policeman had snuck behind the car and open fire killing Richard.

Stay Frosty gents and gentesses.


    1. Thank´s, the first time someone has told me I have written something noir, didn´t even intended that way and had to look up that terminology.
      Appreciate you taking the time to read.

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