Another great prompt by https://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2015/09/23/25-september-2015/
“Get out of the car!” The police man yelled.
Richard stood still with both hands on the stirring wheel, at least a dozen guns where pointed
at him. He lit up his cigarette and inhaled deeply.
He looked at his passenger and calmly said, “time to go”.
“No,no , please don´t” The passenger screamed in despair, but it was a futile plead.
A loud bang ruptured the windows and the passenger was instantly dead.
Justice had been done, the man who had kidnapped and raped his son was now dead.
A policeman had snuck behind the car and open fire killing Richard.
Stay Frosty gents and gentesses.
Justice my **** Richard’s should always win!!!
I felt like having a diabolical twist at the end
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That is awesome y’know? 🙂
Of course I know
Very noir. A very tough kind of justice.
Thank´s, the first time someone has told me I have written something noir, didn´t even intended that way and had to look up that terminology.
Appreciate you taking the time to read.
That gunshot made me jump! Seems the nasty man received an instant death penalty without the inconvenience of going to court!
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Richard( the character) was the judge and the jury…..scary
And thanks for taking the time for reading one of my crazy little stories.
That’s one way to get justice! Great story. 🙂
Thank you
Justice served.
I think you mean raped his son, not rapped?
You´re right about that, I often get that word and really several others mixed up.
Like later and latter.
Thank´s for pointing it out