It´s another edition of https://flashfictionforaspiringwriters.wordpress.com/
“Hit it Mike, hit it !! ” John screamed at the top of his lungs as he looked back
and saw the U.S Sheriff right behind them.
“Hit what?!” John screamed back at John while the water splashed his face, ” you couldn´t
have stolen a more shitty boat!”
John looked up at the hill and saw the white house of his ex wife, He grimaced. She took
his most precious thing and now she had paid for it.
“Hey John, you´re the most incompetent criminal I have seen, you know that?”
“How many have you seen?” Came the reply from behind of the boat.
“Enough to know that you´re an idiot.” Mike said with a grin.
John looked down at his feet, there she was lying on the floor. Her feet tied up. He laughed
out loud. They had to put her to sleep until they reached some kind of safety.
“Dump her!” Mike screamed at Jack as the Sheriff cut them off.
“You´re nuts, no way.”
Eventually the Sheriff just gave them a warning as they untied Lucy, Johns best friend, the dog
that was his, not his wife´s. He would go to courts for eternity and until he ran out of money
so he could be reunited with his dear Lucy.
Stay Frosty gents and gentesses.
It went a bit over 175 words.
a flash fiction site? This is cool, I might give it a try
check it out,there are quite a few
Haha! He kidnapped his dog (and I don’t blame him, I would do the same. LOL) Great story Charly! (You have a typo in the first paragraph. I believe longs should be lungs). Thank you, once again, for participating in Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers Challenge.
Thanks Joy, glad you liked it. You know, dogs are best mens friends…… Gonna change the typo now.
Yes, they are. 🙂
Hmmm, I see my serial killer instincts are rubbing off on you! Great job with the story Charly 😉
Thank you Little devil
Of course ❤ ❤
Of course is one word – ofcourse, imporve your grammar and then if you ask me nicely I can reply to your comments
Charly! I love your fic ❤
Appreciate it
But of course my dear.
I thought he kidnapped his wife at first. Nice twist at the end. People get a bit crazy about their pets. 🙂
Thank´s for reading, glad you thought he kidnapped his wife
Ha! Great twist at the end.
Hi, thank´s for reading. Glad you liked the twist at the end.