Another great prompt by https://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2015/10/14/16-october-2015/
The telephone rang waking her up. She stumbled to the telephone, “hello?”
“I like it when you are sleeping in your panties.”
“Who is it?” She asked while looking at her black panties.
“I´m your friend, your lover.”
“You creep!” She said and hanged the phone.
She was about to go back to her bed when the phone rang again,
” stop calling” she said forcefully, “get a life.”
“Wave at me honey, got the balcony, the black van….. I´m here.”
Carissa put on her pyjamas and opened the door feeling the cold rain making her shiver.
Suddenly she felt a cold sharp object on her neck and a second later she was decapitated.
Stay Frosty gents and gentesses.
Oh boy. That ending gave me the creeps. Nothing terrifying like a creepy stalker. Your words did justice to the photo. ☺
Thank´s Ameena
Oh! I wasn’t expecting that. Nor was she I guess!
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The poor woman didn´t see it coming
Remind me never to sleep in my panties.
Especially the black ones.
Get a thong then, a red one……
Great idea! It will match my eyes.
Seems rather harsh punishment for wearing panties in bed.
Good piece.
She should have worn a thong I guess.
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Hells bells, I wasn’t expecting that!
Swift, Silent and deadly…..
Out of nowhere!
Bam! Just like that
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So he is a fibber too.
That is not nice at all.
I know, he´s a bastard.
Interesting but scary. I like your style of writing, it leaves your readers intrigued and surprised. Good job.
Thank you very much
A stalker, but even more.. Very creepy end.
Thank´s, I could have build up more the ending scene but trying to make it under 100 words hard to do for me.
Eeek! Well timed for Halloween.
I should read it to a kindergarten class.
Great work my side kick serial killer! I hope you didn’t make much mess while decapitating, I taught you better !
I did exactly what I learned from you, so no worries I´m a good, actually excellent serial killer.
So proud of you 😉 ❤
Could you of picked a different name 🙂
Wow! You have no mercy for wearing panties!
haha, so you read this. It really was the first name that came to mind, I was probably answering one of your comments or some writing and the name just stuck. Anyways, the panties where a good touch though…