Prompt by: http://thesecretkeeper.net/2016/01/04/weekly-writing-prompt-18/
It is the
Will be on my street
Up high it holds this up high
Eyes open writ
Shadorma: 6 lines- 3/5/3/3/7/5 syllables
Stay Frosty gents and gentesses.
This is truly beautiful!!
It is a close attempt at the syllable count of a Shadorma. .But you didn’t use the 5 words from the prompt. What you write is abstract. That is your choice. I do abstract painting and understand the use of the abstract. I do not see how this connects to the 5 word challenge. – jk ps. Keep trying.
damn, i missed the part that there was a 5 words in the challenge, that´s why it came out that way. I just saw the different types of forms of poetry you gave out and thought of giving it a try to this Shadorma thing. Which was fun playing around with words. I´ll be more alert next time about looking out for the words you hang up there
It is alright. How were you to know. You had fun with the poetry styles I described. Please do come again. The more you do it, the more relaxed it will make you and the challenge will feel more familiar. – jk
I´ll sure will return