Another great prompt by 11 September 2015 | Rochelle Wisoff-Fields-Addicted to Purple
Photo by: PHOTO PROMPT – © Jennifer Pendergast
“Honey this is so beautiful.” She said to her husband.
“You deserve the best for our second anniversary.”
“How is Jack and Mark?”
“Great assets to the law firm.”
He turned around, smacked her two times over the head with a crowbar,
knocked her unconscious and threw her body to the river, the water turning red as she
“Two strokes for the two you fucked at the same time on our second anniversary you whore!”
He then took a cigarette out of his jacket and smoked his way down the river,
with a smile on his face appreciating the green trees.
Stay Frosty gents and gentesses.
Short and brutal.
She was mean….
Oh I wonder what law-firm that will defend him… Maybe Jack and Mack will be a little bit less happy
He doesn´t have a care in the world now, he got out all his furry that was inside and whatever happens happens
I almost hated to click “like” on this one. Brutal justice there. Now all he has to worry about is being found out and sent to prison. Good one.
Thank you Rochelle
Keep Smiling! 🙂
Thank´s Akiraa, hope your work goes well and hope you tell us a little bit about it when you return. Take care, I´ll keep smiling.
Hey thanks for the wishes.. 😀
Till then you have to keep smiling! 🙂
Not sure why I liked this violent piece, but I did. Matter-of-fact murder!
Probably you liked it because deep deep down…or maybe not so deep, you´re sadistic!! 😉
Gosh, I knew we’d make a perfect team as serial killers 😉
Although, I´d be the one who says who is going to be killed and who is going to be spared
A lot of spouses get killed in this Flash fiction stories…makes me wonder….why don’t they just leave and move on instead of resorting to murder? Nicely crafted story that shows the fury in the main character.
Thank you. I just like to kill people or characters, I even like to kill pets.
I just can´t help but to kill characters……makes me wonder
I hope he had good solid proof!
Of course he had, she´s a woman!! 😉
I wonder how are Jack and Mark doing…
My guess is that their doing pretty good since they had a good “relive” with a married woman
So the man’s forgiven them…
A nice, soothing moment turned violent. Wow. I could definitely feel the rage here, Charly.
Thank´s Amy. He seemed to have to let it out, a bit over the top though….
Here one minute and gone the next. Easy come easy go! LOL Charly. Great story!
Thank´s a lot Joy
Good piece Charly. You don’t get any second chances with that husband.
Thank you. Yep, he´s ruthless
Great astounding piece! I had to rate it 5/5…congrats!
Thank you very much